Mar-17-2012, 03:59 PM (UTC)
After a good break, 'thul have begun rewriting the main story segment. The break was to let the story work itself out a bit in their minds, so that the flaws would be more apparent. Already the first chapter and a half has been rewritten and elaborated somewhat.
The pack character, Ulva, has now changed appearance somewhat, as will the various other members of the packs. It did not make sense for the genes triggering wolf-like traits to either be on or off. Now, while some rare children become full Wolven, most members of the packs have at least some wolf-like traits. (For example, Ulva has gray streaks in her hair, slightly pointy (and furred) ears and thin fuzz of fur on most of her body)
The rewrite will be even heavier in the later parts of this section, as 'thul can already remember not being quite pleased with some of the parts there back when they wrote it... currently its grown up to 69 pages (10 pages finished with current rewrite), so it will probably end up around 90-100 pages.
The pack character, Ulva, has now changed appearance somewhat, as will the various other members of the packs. It did not make sense for the genes triggering wolf-like traits to either be on or off. Now, while some rare children become full Wolven, most members of the packs have at least some wolf-like traits. (For example, Ulva has gray streaks in her hair, slightly pointy (and furred) ears and thin fuzz of fur on most of her body)
The rewrite will be even heavier in the later parts of this section, as 'thul can already remember not being quite pleased with some of the parts there back when they wrote it... currently its grown up to 69 pages (10 pages finished with current rewrite), so it will probably end up around 90-100 pages.
Note:
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
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"Its for charity. Widows and orphans. We need more of them."
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"Its for charity. Widows and orphans. We need more of them."
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