Oct-25-2010, 02:04 PM (UTC)
Ah yes, 'coil' was one of the translated words that I knew was weirdly wrong! I could see it referred to the pool, so I knew what was going on!
Oh how I agree with this! I find a lot of art - ok more the visual arts than writing, but also some writing - so personal to the artist that I wonder why I am supposed to care!
Yes that's putting it bluntly, but I know what you mean!
(Oct-22-2010, 09:09 PM (UTC))Albertosaurus Rex Wrote: The essays are okay, but all the bad memories depress and bewilder me. To put it bluntly: why would anyone care? This was my approach to the contest: nobody would be interested in my worst memory. Why would you be if you don't know me?
So I spun it into a little story, something very few people have done. Like I said, at least it stands out from the crowd.
Oh how I agree with this! I find a lot of art - ok more the visual arts than writing, but also some writing - so personal to the artist that I wonder why I am supposed to care!
Yes that's putting it bluntly, but I know what you mean!