Jan-16-2012, 02:40 PM (UTC)
The way you described it, it was a story to fit the sex into, rather than sex fit into a story. Some might like that, but they are fewer than those that enjoy a good story.
Note:
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
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"Its for charity. Widows and orphans. We need more of them."
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