Feb-23-2012, 02:21 PM (UTC)
(Feb-23-2012, 02:04 PM (UTC))FoolishGirl Wrote:No problem, 'thul haven't been writing today, or most of yesterday, due to needing to plan more of what will happen there.(Feb-23-2012, 01:11 PM (UTC))thul Wrote: points of view are an very interesting thing... in 'thul's little story, its not unusual for it to suddenly switch from 1st to 3rd, particularly when covering large chunks of time.
I regret I haven't been keeping up with your story project, 'thul. Does the first person narrator stay the same throughout, or does it shift? How big are these chunks of time? Months, years, lifetimes?
Currently its mainly focused in around two pairs of characters, shifting at need.
Typically the narrative chunks tend to cover several years... Like when a character is aging from around 12-13 to 21. It would be possible to write all those years, but that would take a lot of time and fill in lots of details unneeded for the story itself.
Note:
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
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