Jan-15-2012, 10:29 PM (UTC)
I'll be grinning about that for the rest of the day! 
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'thullord of the three realms 2,739 Posts:
Jan-16-2012, 02:53 AM (UTC)
Books like that one are why 'thul steer clear of that type of book. Its fully ok to have the acts described, but when the story is a framework for the acts, rather than the acts being a natural part of the story, then something is wrong.
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when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
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fool-ishbeloved 1,032 Posts:
Jan-16-2012, 02:18 PM (UTC)
There may have been a story in there somewhere, but I was thinking 'Oh no, surely not again!' that often, I must have missed it! Most of us are quite capable of using our imagination to fill in the gaps..we don't need such full-on descriptions, though I do realise that vivid descriptions do appeal to some people. Whatever floats your boat, I suppose. For me, there are few authors who can write a sex scene well. Subtle but to the point does it for me. 
'thullord of the three realms 2,739 Posts:
Jan-16-2012, 02:40 PM (UTC)
The way you described it, it was a story to fit the sex into, rather than sex fit into a story. Some might like that, but they are fewer than those that enjoy a good story.
Note:
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
__..)/..____________..\/..____________..\(..__
¯¯””/(””¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯''(''/\'')''¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯””)\””¯¯ "Its for charity. Widows and orphans. We need more of them." __..)/..____________..\/..____________..\(..__ ¯¯””/(””¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯''(''/\'')''¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯””)\””¯¯
'thullord of the three realms 2,739 Posts:
Jan-16-2012, 02:55 PM (UTC)
These beings thought just that.
Note:
when 'thul write in all italics, it is the lord of the three realms within 'thul speaking. A fairly egoistical, but also somewhat simple-minded dragon. Do not take such posts at face value.
__..)/..____________..\/..____________..\(..__
¯¯””/(””¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯''(''/\'')''¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯””)\””¯¯ "Its for charity. Widows and orphans. We need more of them." __..)/..____________..\/..____________..\(..__ ¯¯””/(””¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯''(''/\'')''¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯””)\””¯¯ 
Valaryacatalyst 516 Posts:
Jan-16-2012, 04:41 PM (UTC)
I happen to be a big fan of erotic fiction. It's a guilty-pleasure for me; I call them my little "brain breaks." Whenever I read a series of, erm, "normal" fiction I tend to delve so far in to it with theories and possible outcomes I give myself headaches, hahah. In fact, I have a friend in California who, over the past 6 months, has swapped over 2,000 emails with me JUST picking apart ASOIAF and ROTE. So erotic fiction is my brain break.. and so much better than cheesy romance novels. Like fool-ish said, I don't mind reading a bit of smut.  In fact, Albertsaurus Rex mentioned some erotic tentacle sci-fi book in another thread (speaking poorly of it) and I had to immediately go purchase it on my e-reader, hahah. There's a series of EXTREMELY graphic erotic fiction books I like mainly because of the world these characters are in. It's science-fiction and, while there are a lot of sex-scenes (and the story at the end is a bit too-good-to-be-true romance-ish plot), I like how much thought she put in to aspects of space-travel and certain technological advancements.  Joost, fool-ish, if you aren't afraid of some major smut - check out Morgan Hawke's Interstellar Service & Discipline series.
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joostabomination 655 Posts:
Jan-16-2012, 07:04 PM (UTC)
If you're interested in smut-with-a-story: You need an account on http://www.storiesonline.net to read those. It's free and you don't get all kinds of spam from them, so it's safe. - An ordinary sex life (lots and lots of sex) part 1: http://storiesonline.net/sex-story/56730 part 2: http://storiesonline.net/sex-story/57791 part 3: http://storiesonline.net/sex-story/60007 part 4: http://storiesonline.net/sex-story/67376 - The book of David (lots and lots of sex) part 1: http://storiesonline.net/s/54861 part 2: http://storiesonline.net/s/60554 - Dance of a lifetime: http://storiesonline.net/s/40258 (some sex) - Charlotte's movie: http://storiesonline.net/s/41458 (lots and lots of sex) - Playing the game (some sex): part 1: http://storiesonline.net/s/52391 part 2: http://storiesonline.net/s/53582 part 3: http://storiesonline.net/s/55306 - Stormy monday: http://storiesonline.net/s/53311 (some sex) - Conflicted: http://storiesonline.net/s/65628 (lots and lots of sex) You know nothing, Jon Snow
Valaryacatalyst 516 Posts:
Jan-16-2012, 07:19 PM (UTC)
(This post was last modified: Jan-16-2012, 07:20 PM (UTC) by Valarya.)
LOL thanks Joost. Btw, have you read any Morgan Hawke? Edit: Noooooo! That site is blocked at work. 
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